Draft Front Cover- Magazine Feedback

After presenting my teacher with a rough draft of my EDM magazine's front cover, she noted some improvements, as shown in the pictures below:

To simplify, the requested modifications are:

-Title the magazine 'This is hypnotix', rather than simply hypnotix. This will match the masthead to the web address.

-To move the main image down so there is less black shirt, consequently focuses more on his face.

-To move the slogan 'LOVE EDM, LIVE EDM' below the masthead.

-Change the font of the central text to make it readable.

-Read over and insure no spelling mistakes.

I was told it would also be beneficial to add a further effect to my masthead- one that would look hypnotic, clearly linking to the title.


This would add individuality to my magazine, therefore built up its identity- it will stand out against competitors.